Friday, 6 November 2015

The grateful soul

The grateful soul
fights with the greedy ego.

Depending on who wins,
either both survive
or both die.

When I was reading this 11 days after I first had posted it in this blog, 
I felt it was a bit strong, a bit opiniated.
Perhaps it would be better and a bit softer:

The grateful soul and the greedy ego
Sometimes they fight
If the first one wins, peace of mind is mine
If the second one wins, often I may feel full
but rarely satisfied.

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